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Post by [xx] Taylor Spears on Aug 7, 2006 13:50:06 GMT
an interesting plot with i have muse for. I create another younger character. Under the age of 18. Played by Estafania Urdenta (sp?). She is slightly troubled. Her parents are strict christians who have her wrapped in cotton wool. She really studies hard, she wants to be a vet. She could maybe in her first year of college (17) or maybe even sixteen. Her parents have a curfew for her, say 9pm every night. She respects these wishes but she is craving for her own life but dare not stand up to her father, maybe he is slightly aggressive and believes in disaplining his children by using physical force? So while she's just out, maybe at the beach somewhere quiet doing some studying she meets this guy, he could be older than her maybe? And she knows she likes him, and then we could make a plot from there?
Yuh i want this one lol, i will delete shayne.
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Post by xx S K Y viviene | on Aug 7, 2006 14:03:30 GMT
Ooh. Jaycey baby may be good for this, yes?
Jaso runs Diamondz and Pearlz, the strip club, hmm ... maybe, lemme think ...
mebbe .... when she's at the beach, she's studying, but she's crying also got a lot of make up on, to cover the large bruise that her dad's done after disciplinging her, but the tears have made it run, so the bruise is visible.
Uh ...
Jason could find her and take her back to his office, and clean her up, but find like finger marks on her wrists and stuff, and can be all like, putting ice on her eye and stuff, and she could tell him after hepersuades her because at first she can be like 'no, it's nothing, im ok' but she just breaks down ....
And he could let her go, and then the next day, she comes back .... again, he's been hurting her, and forcing her to do things or whatever. She could say he's ruining her life, and basically, she uses Jayce as a councellor, a therapist. Then ... he could offer her a drink, and they just have a few drinks and something, and he makes a move on her .... what happens next is up to YOUUU!
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Post by [x] Imogen // Taylor on Aug 7, 2006 14:06:10 GMT
It's good. but like i said, her parents`are strict christians so i dont think that would fit into him beating her for no reason seen as shes a doll and basically cant do anything wrong, but maybe that comes on later. You are fantastic at plots, make one for me 
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Post by xx S K Y viviene | on Aug 7, 2006 14:12:38 GMT
OK, let's do what i normally do .... BULLET POINT!!! Woo. OK. Let's see.
- [NAME] comes from a background of christianity and has always been wrapped up in cotton wool.
- She has big ambitions to be a vet
- She's an angel, and can't do wrong, but sometimes doesn't agree with her parents views. But doesn't dare stand up to her father as he can be quite aggressive and can be on to physically dicipline his children.
- She goes to the beach, and is sat alone in a really secluded part just studying.
- Jason walks by.
Heh. Now what?
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Post by [x] Imogen // Taylor on Aug 7, 2006 14:18:36 GMT
- (c) Jason Walks By
- He wants to talk to someone - so does she so he comes and sits, talking to her before he goes to work
- She looks older than what she is, but still he asked her how old she is and hes like holy shit
- He asks her to drop by for a drink but she says she is busy - really she knows she will not be allowed to go
- They bump into each other the next day and hes like why did you not come last night, she was like i was busy i'm sorry
- They hang out for the rest of the day or something, she ignores her fathers and mother phonecalls, he takes her home and her father is waiting outside the house and litrally drags her away from Jason and threatens him to stay away
- He is furious with how her father has just treated her and he phones her up in the night. maybe asks her to sneak out?
- Then what? lol
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Post by xx S K Y viviene | on Aug 7, 2006 15:03:48 GMT
- He asks her to sneak away
- and she does, running to Diamondz and Pearlz where he lets her into his office.
- he kisses her, thanking her for getting away.
- she tells him she really likes him, but her dad's disown her if he found out so they haveto keep things secret.
- he locks his door and asks her if she wants to .... do aything.
- she says shed like a drink and he brings out the vodka.
- he starts moving his hand up her shirt and shes a little freaked, and tenses her body.
- he can ask her whats up ... maybe she could be a virgin or something.
- so he prmoses he'll be gentle with her. and takes her back to his place. telling her not to drink, as it'll ruin the night for her...
- but her dad could be in his car outside, and when he sees jayce and [what's her name?] kissing in the top bedroom, then her laying on the bed, he breaks in ... it takes him around half an hour to break in, by which time, jay and his daughter are already screwing.
- he can hear them, and he can hear her moaning or whatever.
- then he could run upstairs and burst in on them
- she's so shocked, and bursts nto tears as her dad grips her, slaps her and drags her downstairs naked.
- jason runs after her, and as they reach the door, her dad lets her go, she automatically runs to jayce who holds her tight.
- her father tells her shes to go home and she replies. I am home.
- jason could tell her dad that he loves her, and he's just took her virginity, and he can't do anything aobut it. its her life and she can do what she wants.
anything else?
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Post by [x] Imogen // Taylor on Aug 7, 2006 15:21:26 GMT
Love it
- (contiuned & editted) Her dad breaks in and he like goes in and throws her clothes at her, tells her to get dressed which she obviouslly does and she has to leave
- She gets home and like her father hits her, and her mother packs her bags and she is thrown out
- She phones Jason, and tells him she has no where to go (i think it might be too early for them to fall in love after 2 days)
- Then something could happen from there?
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Post by xx S K Y viviene | on Aug 7, 2006 18:12:06 GMT
Haha. Yup. No but i was thinking, what if they'd been arranging their little meeting where she spoke to Jason for a few months, and a relationship had been brewing?
Like ... and THEN the sex incident with her dad happens ...?
So, after they say that then she could go home and her dad hits her, she phones up in a right state .... yeh?
or no?
haha
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Post by [xx] Taylor Spears on Aug 7, 2006 20:29:34 GMT
So what are you saying, that when they bump into each other at the beach they have already known each other for a few months?
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Post by C A S S I D Y ford xx on Aug 7, 2006 20:32:45 GMT
Nooooooooooooooooo! Haha. When they meet at the beach they've never met ... BUTTTT they see each other for a while before they decide to sleep with each other. If you get me. Like they become close friend for a couple months.
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Post by [xx] Taylor Spears on Aug 7, 2006 20:38:08 GMT
Okay i get it know, but if you wanted to, i'd be happy to do it as if they already know each other so its quicker started, but if you want to do that 1  So should i use Estafania?
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Post by C A S S I D Y ford xx on Aug 7, 2006 20:46:23 GMT
Yeh, I suppose we could say they've known each other, so we can get into it quicker ... yup!
Um ... yeh use Estefania ....
you wanna make a post, or you too museless, coz I am, and I'm replyin' on Brindestone.
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Post by [xx] Taylor Spears on Aug 7, 2006 20:48:16 GMT
I'm doing her application, but i'll post for you after that.
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